Friday, December 16, 2011

I started this little bit of a story. Should I continue writing it?

Oh my goshh! this is obviously fantastic and i don't say this on here often (u can check my recently answered Q's for proof hah] u seem like a really mature writer, the conversation was intriguing and witty. I loved the banter between Clara and Steven. His personality was hilarious, the way he talked, and his snooty attitude i honestly visualized the entire thing. My favorite part was the : Sorry, Steven,” Clara said hastily, gathering her purse and coat. “I’d really rather die in a burning school bus.” < icing on the cake. If you ever write more of this please post it for me to read, i love ur writing style and i honestly have nothing to critique (which is kinda sad cus i love giving advice) if this was a book, i'd buy it. Your story has me craving more...keep writing and good luck!

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